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A walk to remember (Version 2 : Love)

Edition 2.1



I never thought to visit you
Kissing you was more than a fantasy

Walking with you on the University roads
 I felt  your awkwardness every time

Receiving parents' calls
Lying ‘m roaming with friends
Feeding the fishes of that pond
Trying to be cozy in my arms

Sitting closely on the rickshaw
Clinging to find some support

Stretching my arms to pull you up
Visiting that old temple on the Hills

Thinking where to visit when it fell dark
Dissolving when found that park
Learning the first kiss through lips
Promising it truly, little dramatically 

I remember everything, the walk we had
Everything that happened that day

Alas, I remember everything
Alas - ‘coz it’s difficult to be that way….


(P.S.: I'm not a poet, just tried to convert what it'd be felt when it's first time in to some words. Edition# refers to amendments this poem has seen :)

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